On the official walkthrough there are what named "lust points". Are they important ? I keep on "farming" interest points, because i thought that's how you are closer to the girls, but does lust points also has to be farm ? (because most of the time we have to choose between lust and interest points). And at what extend ?
Oh, and absolute great work on that game. I was sceptic with the dialogue at first and stayed for the visuals, and oh lord i was wrong. Plot, dialogue and visuals are killing it. Best Waifu Miharu is also a good reason to playing !
I haven’t downloaded the game yet, I’ve only seen it through related games.
Seeing the long post about the character named Chika that I don’t know yet I have to say a few things.
I don’t mind at all that the character is not a virgin and even had more than one person in the past, the only thing I don’t like is sharing love interests or girls with another male or female character and I don’t like netorare either, what I do like and I say this because I know the difference, netori. Yeah, I’m hypocritical I guess but obviously I only like it in fiction, I don’t go through life stealing girlfriends haha I only love a single one.
Basically you have sex with chika, she says she's a whore. Then later you see her coming out of a love hotel with another dude. She's a LI, fucks you then continues to fuck other men. Enjoy.
I see, I haven’t tried it yet because I’m very slow to try new things, besides I have a lot of VNs pending and I don’t always have time.
With what you told me I have to say that I don’t know what “LI” is but well emm with the other thing you explain I don’t think I’m interested in the character, I’m not going to hate her either but I mean I’m only interested in completing her route and that’s it, I’m not interested in the “fuckbuddies” if that’s the relationship the MC has with the character in question. I’m pretty basic and I’m only interested in the harem as long as the plot is interesting, like in Superhuman, Niichan’s VN or Caribdis, Ripples. Yes in those games I mentioned there are characters that have casual scenes but they are less than the main characters.
So LI means Love Interest and she is a main girl. The dev removed 2 other LI's to make Chika (the whore) a Main LI. I wouldn't be surprised if she's forced because we're pretty much forced being forced into Yaezaki. I feel like most of this is going to be forced. Just seeing what the Dev is peddling here, trying to act like having a LI whoring herself out to other guys in a "harem" game is acceptable I'm sure he's going to push more into the NTR/NTS aspect of the game.
Uh... I don't know about other people but the extra "comment" from Dev got my jaded ass to give this game a shot. Just got to V0.1 end. So far the story's interesting, and the comic relief is cute without bending the tone too much. (Never thought I'd see a School Rumble love letter so early in, it really made me chuckle.) I'll say the dialogue and internal monologues of the characters get to be a little too... net-speakish(?) for me at times as written.
And to those who seriously expect fictional ladies to be virginal on first-contact with your protagonist in order to not lose their merit as romantic interests... I sincerely hope your potential irl interests correctly gauge your expectations of them by first-contact.
Ok, so I just met Chika, and I can understand why the author chose to give a public, three-paragraph ovation in her defense. She's a badass and immediately compelling character. Can't wait to learn more about her. And yeah, she deserves to be an available romance route option.
Also gotta say Ayase is turning out to be one hell of a nuanced femme fatale.
Compelling character that fucks the whole town while being a main love interest. What low standards you have. I guess you're into being cucked and NTR there are tons of games like that for you.
dude you're so funny. You just gotta search the whole comments section for people you disagree with and try to dunk on them. (edit: Wow... I didn't realize that was true; you really are actually all over the place, aren't you...? For all of your accusations about this being an NTR, you sure don't need help keeping your dick dry, do you...? Anyway...)
Anyway, you're misrepresenting her storyline... it hasn't even been halfway written.
Here's where we are right now:
-Chika is a prostitute. She's a student with an abusive home and school life.
- A little way into her route, MC can try to become friends with her, at which point she offers to have sex with him. It's worth noting that you get no points toward her relationship route for making this choice, and do receive points toward it if you refuse her offer. (source: official walkthrough.) You should think about that for a second.
If you choose not to have sex with her, absolutely NOTHING has been written about the way Chika may want to have a relationship with the MC. If you remember, choosing this actually improves her opinion of you. And as others have reported, actually having sex with her at this point leads to a cuckold-type relationship- at least at time of writing. So, how is that not a "you and everyone else who picked that choice" problem? (Mind you, I've been trying like Hell to get Miharu & MC to bang every chance they get, but they never get past oral (minus the flashback, or course). It seems to me this game just puts an more of an emphasis on building relationships.
So... what have we learned...? Chika is hinted to be a prostitute from the VERY FIRST SCENE she is in. The dialogue with Yuuka's bullies make it clear with her. If you find this unacceptable for a LI, and... well, can read... why would you want to fuck her in the first place? Why are you complaining about this character when you're not forced into a romance with them? Why do you need to go out of your way to berate people who see worth in the character...? Ah, it's because you're a prick trying to prove something on the Internet that you don't have in real life.
Whatever you say Mister Captain Cuck Save a Hoe. I'm not even going to argue. With you. To be honest I'm here telling the truth and steering people away from lying devs and players like yourself. This was said to be vanilla harem game. 2 love interests were removed to make room for a whore main LI. There isn't anything compelling about adding a whore with a sob story that has been used in other games before that were abandoned. If the dev was up front about NTR in the first place we wouldn't be having this conversation in the first place.
1. Is Chika a whore?
2. Is she a main love interest?
3. Is she fucking anyone else that's not the MC?
Go ahead and answer me those questions. If they're all yes (which is the correct answer btw) Then it's NTR. Please stop trying to tell people otherwise.
Damm, for a Moment, I would like to live inside this game... And the Trip on the Beach with Miharu and the Others, I can't explain what I was feeling when they watch the Sunset with Miharu sitting by your Side...
Okay, I've ended this game in update 0.3 a few times about 2 months ago. Can't wait for new update. The story at this point is really good, every character got to me in other way so far. But i can't really understand why people are hating Chika so much. Like if you guys don't like the story then why are you playing it? For me Ayase is best written character but Chika is right after her. This AVN is great so far, i hope it stays like it in future updates or even get better. For now it's 9/10 to me, good work KS!
So I spent like 20 minutes in the game Just Fast Forwarding and I must say that Everything is fantastic and amazing until that prostitute came.
Animation +10
Arts +10
Main Storyline +8
Drama/Romance Storyline +10
Gameplay +9.5
Gameplay Style +7
Virgin Girlfriend/s +50
Prostitute GF but IDK to MC, Non-Virgin or Used Woman -100
I am quite disappointed but I am impressed by the art style and the animation but I just see those kind of woman "Weak", "Disposable", "Brain Dead", etc etc and in my mind "Better to die 1 day with your dignity and integrity still intact than be a Slave but lives 100 days.
Respect to the Author Dedication but In My opinion this is a Waste of Potential.
That Chika post is new I haven't seen that before, whoever that is fam you need to understand that this is the creators choice and this is their game and this is fiction lol.
You are doing good btw KS, don't let those kinds of talk get to you fam and I don't even think anyone is giving you a 1 star review here your game is almost full 5 stars fam. Even I gave it a full 5 like a year ago. I still can't believe it's been a year already sheesh!! how time flies. Keep up the good work fam, stay frosty and godspeed!! :D
Haven’t gotten that far in the game yet—just got through the first scene. But I gotta say, the animation in this game is seriously amazing. Probably some of the best I’ve seen in a visual novel.
I am planning to play this, just because graphics looks amazing, but that wall of text from author threw me off a bit. I hope i can evade Chicka’s path from the begining, or if she’s not a prostitute, just some hints about that. But its fine, i get it, your story.
What pissed me off a bit is ‘Do you really expect every girl you see to be a complete virgin?’, you know what, yes, yes i do. There is no indication that some girls are not virgins, and because its a ‘vanilla romance’, i would expect them to be virgins. One of the things that got me looking into this game actually (just after graphics).
Just include it somehere, except long wall of text that many wont read, and all good.
Not really trying to be hatefull, just so many p-games dont care about virginity for some reason, and i wanted something different.
The plot is quite linear, there is barely any choices, you just follow the story. It's very good tho. (If you were looking for a quick fap you should probably try something else tho)
It's not about being a virgin or not - thereare plenty of AVN characters that aren't. It's about a potential LI actively hooking up with others DURING the game.
Riona from Being a DIK is also a prostitute, and no one has a problem with that, because of that very difference: There is no moment in the story where she is with someone else.
I am a player from the eternal world.Experienced your game.Overall, the plot is very good.Especially the story of the relationship between two childhood sweethearts.，I hope there will be more funny and interesting stories.The fans are waiting for you.KS*
It's been months since I downloaded this game but I still haven't dare to touch it Hahaha. Well it's on my list to play but it will be the last one, I will play.
Just play the update after comeback. I want to play the update earlier but i just got burn out becouse of my college.
So as i play the update. All i gotta say it. It was a absolute cinema. The story Was great for the update. And for the humor and memes. I found it funny. Especially when the mc gathered with his gang taling about melons and bodys it was peak funny for me. But it was my opinion since my humor was destroyed becouse of ig reels.and The sexscene was masterpiece. Bro literally breaking the limit of hs2. Overall interms of everything in the update it was great. More then just great.
But maybe for down side for me was chika story. Everyone is mad the way she was a prostitute. But for me. It was just to early to tell her story i mean. Any average vn gonna put a story like that in a middle or ending of the game for a serious story. since most of the vn early game are just bunch of introducing every character they gonna put in the story. But still you got some strength dare to use this kinda prostitue into one of favorite char and put this so early. Sometimes we must take a risk to become stronger or better. But overall since her story still new. I hope she can have a deep development progress. How the mc or herself can affect the story later.
And for the best thing i take from thid update was the mc with sakurai. Holy shit the plot twist between them got caught me off laugh too. I sorry to said that my love for ayase was breaking down becouse of her. But overall every character you made was masterpiece. In my opinion. Your character was the best in my list. And eternum as the second. But it was my opinion so i dont know about other. Overall absolute cinema 🖐🖐
i actualy like the game and have been waiting for updates for sometime. and have been wondering if any would come out. i have read some of the comments and know critics can sometimes be cruel. anyhow i realise that people of different countries talk different then others and certain words can be in different places then their use to and can seem confusing. i to found myself getting confused while playing certain games like this one. but that don't mean i didn't injoy them. because i did. in fact i have several games saved on an external hard drive. eternum is my number 1 favorit. please donot let the critics keep you from finishing this game. i would love to see where this goes.
ACTUAL REVIEW INCOMING (Not so serious, but I'll try to give some actual criticism), no spoilers.
In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new.
This game has something unique, it really makes you want to keep reading and watching the stunning visuals. I'd say that for being your first game, this is already one of the top VNs there are.
Some of the good things I can point of your story is the amazing setting. Many of the VNs I have played are usually set in the US, which gets boring really fast. Also, the story pacing is great, we get to discover new key points to the story, and yet it leaves you to wonder what's going to happen next, I'd say that this is one of the most attractive things about this VN, it really kept me invested in the story from the first moment. The characters are also really well done, each one has a unique background story which makes them more believable. And I will take this opportunity to comment about the most controversial character, which happens to be a prostitute, and I'm just going to say that whoever thinks that this could potentially ruin their experience is missing on a very good story, sometimes you gotta give your characters a harsh story to make them feel alive, if every girl is just suddenly attracted to the MC it becomes boring, so I'd say this is very brave from KS.
On the negative things about this VN, I want to point that having too many characters show up on one update can be a double edged sword, in my personal opinion, it would be better to make each update centered on 2-3 characters, instead of giving every character little time on screen. And something I wanted to point out is the lack of a visual effect for the flashbacks, I think it would be nice to add some color effect to the flashbacks to make them feel more 'nostalgic' or something, idk, I'm not a game developer lol.
Anyways, that's my honest review of this game, I think that you're cooking with this story, and I'm looking forward to the next updates. 🤵🍷
I played the first few minutes and have to say that that the English text is very mediocre, translation wise. Some might not care, but for me it's a big immersion breaker.
Also, the screen for the MC name input at the start of the game is completely invisible. I'm on Windows, I had to backspace and type in the name blind. (Note: Now when I run the game a second time, it works perfectly fine. This glitch only comes up when I start the game with zero persistent data. Weird.)
Visually the game looks pretty good! If you bump the English text quality up a notch I'll gladly give it a second shot. It might never happen, I know, but I thought you'd appreciate the feedback.
Now that I’ve played I read the Chika announcement. Honestly it’s pretty refreshing to play a game like this that even touches the topic of prostitution. Even more so that it’s not done in a negative way. Work is work and it puts food on the table. It’s also nice that we’re as far in as we are with few sex scenes. Makes it feel like the characters are people and that there’s a story to tell. Looking forward to more
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On the official walkthrough there are what named "lust points". Are they important ? I keep on "farming" interest points, because i thought that's how you are closer to the girls, but does lust points also has to be farm ? (because most of the time we have to choose between lust and interest points). And at what extend ?
Oh, and absolute great work on that game. I was sceptic with the dialogue at first and stayed for the visuals, and oh lord i was wrong. Plot, dialogue and visuals are killing it. Best Waifu Miharu is also a good reason to playing !
How long until the next update.
I haven’t downloaded the game yet, I’ve only seen it through related games.
Seeing the long post about the character named Chika that I don’t know yet I have to say a few things.
I don’t mind at all that the character is not a virgin and even had more than one person in the past, the only thing I don’t like is sharing love interests or girls with another male or female character and I don’t like netorare either, what I do like and I say this because I know the difference, netori. Yeah, I’m hypocritical I guess but obviously I only like it in fiction, I don’t go through life stealing girlfriends haha I only love a single one.
So I guess I will like it.
Basically you have sex with chika, she says she's a whore. Then later you see her coming out of a love hotel with another dude. She's a LI, fucks you then continues to fuck other men. Enjoy.
I see, I haven’t tried it yet because I’m very slow to try new things, besides I have a lot of VNs pending and I don’t always have time.
With what you told me I have to say that I don’t know what “LI” is but well emm with the other thing you explain I don’t think I’m interested in the character, I’m not going to hate her either but I mean I’m only interested in completing her route and that’s it, I’m not interested in the “fuckbuddies” if that’s the relationship the MC has with the character in question. I’m pretty basic and I’m only interested in the harem as long as the plot is interesting, like in Superhuman, Niichan’s VN or Caribdis, Ripples. Yes in those games I mentioned there are characters that have casual scenes but they are less than the main characters.
So LI means Love Interest and she is a main girl. The dev removed 2 other LI's to make Chika (the whore) a Main LI. I wouldn't be surprised if she's forced because we're pretty much forced being forced into Yaezaki. I feel like most of this is going to be forced. Just seeing what the Dev is peddling here, trying to act like having a LI whoring herself out to other guys in a "harem" game is acceptable I'm sure he's going to push more into the NTR/NTS aspect of the game.
When will your next update of the game I love it not that boring like the other adult games I play.
Uh... I don't know about other people but the extra "comment" from Dev got my jaded ass to give this game a shot. Just got to V0.1 end. So far the story's interesting, and the comic relief is cute without bending the tone too much. (Never thought I'd see a School Rumble love letter so early in, it really made me chuckle.) I'll say the dialogue and internal monologues of the characters get to be a little too... net-speakish(?) for me at times as written.
And to those who seriously expect fictional ladies to be virginal on first-contact with your protagonist in order to not lose their merit as romantic interests... I sincerely hope your potential irl interests correctly gauge your expectations of them by first-contact.
Ok, so I just met Chika, and I can understand why the author chose to give a public, three-paragraph ovation in her defense. She's a badass and immediately compelling character. Can't wait to learn more about her. And yeah, she deserves to be an available romance route option.
Also gotta say Ayase is turning out to be one hell of a nuanced femme fatale.
Compelling character that fucks the whole town while being a main love interest. What low standards you have. I guess you're into being cucked and NTR there are tons of games like that for you.
dude you're so funny. You just gotta search the whole comments section for people you disagree with and try to dunk on them. (edit: Wow... I didn't realize that was true; you really are actually all over the place, aren't you...? For all of your accusations about this being an NTR, you sure don't need help keeping your dick dry, do you...? Anyway...)
Anyway, you're misrepresenting her storyline... it hasn't even been halfway written.
Here's where we are right now:
-Chika is a prostitute. She's a student with an abusive home and school life.
- A little way into her route, MC can try to become friends with her, at which point she offers to have sex with him. It's worth noting that you get no points toward her relationship route for making this choice, and do receive points toward it if you refuse her offer. (source: official walkthrough.) You should think about that for a second.
If you choose not to have sex with her, absolutely NOTHING has been written about the way Chika may want to have a relationship with the MC. If you remember, choosing this actually improves her opinion of you. And as others have reported, actually having sex with her at this point leads to a cuckold-type relationship- at least at time of writing. So, how is that not a "you and everyone else who picked that choice" problem? (Mind you, I've been trying like Hell to get Miharu & MC to bang every chance they get, but they never get past oral (minus the flashback, or course). It seems to me this game just puts an more of an emphasis on building relationships.
So... what have we learned...? Chika is hinted to be a prostitute from the VERY FIRST SCENE she is in. The dialogue with Yuuka's bullies make it clear with her. If you find this unacceptable for a LI, and... well, can read... why would you want to fuck her in the first place? Why are you complaining about this character when you're not forced into a romance with them? Why do you need to go out of your way to berate people who see worth in the character...?
Ah, it's because you're a prick trying to prove something on the Internet that you don't have in real life.
Whatever you say Mister Captain Cuck Save a Hoe. I'm not even going to argue. With you. To be honest I'm here telling the truth and steering people away from lying devs and players like yourself. This was said to be vanilla harem game. 2 love interests were removed to make room for a whore main LI. There isn't anything compelling about adding a whore with a sob story that has been used in other games before that were abandoned. If the dev was up front about NTR in the first place we wouldn't be having this conversation in the first place.
1. Is Chika a whore?
2. Is she a main love interest?
3. Is she fucking anyone else that's not the MC?
Go ahead and answer me those questions. If they're all yes (which is the correct answer btw) Then it's NTR. Please stop trying to tell people otherwise.
Damm, for a Moment, I would like to live inside this game... And the Trip on the Beach with Miharu and the Others, I can't explain what I was feeling when they watch the Sunset with Miharu sitting by your Side...
Okay, I've ended this game in update 0.3 a few times about 2 months ago. Can't wait for new update. The story at this point is really good, every character got to me in other way so far. But i can't really understand why people are hating Chika so much. Like if you guys don't like the story then why are you playing it? For me Ayase is best written character but Chika is right after her. This AVN is great so far, i hope it stays like it in future updates or even get better. For now it's 9/10 to me, good work KS!
So I spent like 20 minutes in the game Just Fast Forwarding and I must say that Everything is fantastic and amazing until that prostitute came.
Animation +10
Arts +10
Main Storyline +8
Drama/Romance Storyline +10
Gameplay +9.5
Gameplay Style +7
Virgin Girlfriend/s +50
Prostitute GF but IDK to MC, Non-Virgin or Used Woman -100
I am quite disappointed but I am impressed by the art style and the animation but I just see those kind of woman "Weak", "Disposable", "Brain Dead", etc etc and in my mind "Better to die 1 day with your dignity and integrity still intact than be a Slave but lives 100 days.
Respect to the Author Dedication but In My opinion this is a Waste of Potential.
确实不错
can't wait the next update
Looking forward to the author's sequel.I'll come back once in a while.This is a good visual novel.️ ️ ️☘️☘️☘️☘️
man easily top 2 fav for me the animation and the model of characters are top tier the story is top natch to
That Chika post is new I haven't seen that before, whoever that is fam you need to understand that this is the creators choice and this is their game and this is fiction lol.
You are doing good btw KS, don't let those kinds of talk get to you fam and I don't even think anyone is giving you a 1 star review here your game is almost full 5 stars fam. Even I gave it a full 5 like a year ago. I still can't believe it's been a year already sheesh!! how time flies. Keep up the good work fam, stay frosty and godspeed!! :D
Haven’t gotten that far in the game yet—just got through the first scene. But I gotta say, the animation in this game is seriously amazing. Probably some of the best I’ve seen in a visual novel.
That said, the story so far isn’t really my thing, so I’m peacing out.
The things people complain about baffles me sometimes, keep cooking KawaiiSukebe, don't let the masses dictate your story
I am planning to play this, just because graphics looks amazing, but that wall of text from author threw me off a bit. I hope i can evade Chicka’s path from the begining, or if she’s not a prostitute, just some hints about that. But its fine, i get it, your story.
What pissed me off a bit is ‘Do you really expect every girl you see to be a complete virgin?’, you know what, yes, yes i do. There is no indication that some girls are not virgins, and because its a ‘vanilla romance’, i would expect them to be virgins. One of the things that got me looking into this game actually (just after graphics).
Just include it somehere, except long wall of text that many wont read, and all good.
Not really trying to be hatefull, just so many p-games dont care about virginity for some reason, and i wanted something different.
The plot is quite linear, there is barely any choices, you just follow the story. It's very good tho. (If you were looking for a quick fap you should probably try something else tho)
It's not about being a virgin or not - thereare plenty of AVN characters that aren't. It's about a potential LI actively hooking up with others DURING the game.
Riona from Being a DIK is also a prostitute, and no one has a problem with that, because of that very difference: There is no moment in the story where she is with someone else.
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I am a player from the eternal world.Experienced your game.Overall, the plot is very good.Especially the story of the relationship between two childhood sweethearts.，I hope there will be more funny and interesting stories.The fans are waiting for you.KS*
好长时间了过去，有没有什么进展
Funny game
how to unlock scenes 5,6,8 and 9? been starting all over again and again dont know what choices to make
Is the dev still updating this game?
this game is a hidden gem
animation than can be sit next to eternum
If you look into the last update yes he is still on it.
thank god
Always Check Last Update or discord/patr. :)
It keep exiting me in the game, how to fix it???
It's been months since I downloaded this game but I still haven't dare to touch it Hahaha. Well it's on my list to play but it will be the last one, I will play.
Just play the update after comeback. I want to play the update earlier but i just got burn out becouse of my college.
So as i play the update. All i gotta say it. It was a absolute cinema. The story Was great for the update. And for the humor and memes. I found it funny. Especially when the mc gathered with his gang taling about melons and bodys it was peak funny for me. But it was my opinion since my humor was destroyed becouse of ig reels.and The sexscene was masterpiece. Bro literally breaking the limit of hs2. Overall interms of everything in the update it was great. More then just great.
But maybe for down side for me was chika story. Everyone is mad the way she was a prostitute. But for me. It was just to early to tell her story i mean. Any average vn gonna put a story like that in a middle or ending of the game for a serious story. since most of the vn early game are just bunch of introducing every character they gonna put in the story. But still you got some strength dare to use this kinda prostitue into one of favorite char and put this so early. Sometimes we must take a risk to become stronger or better. But overall since her story still new. I hope she can have a deep development progress. How the mc or herself can affect the story later.
And for the best thing i take from thid update was the mc with sakurai. Holy shit the plot twist between them got caught me off laugh too. I sorry to said that my love for ayase was breaking down becouse of her. But overall every character you made was masterpiece. In my opinion. Your character was the best in my list. And eternum as the second. But it was my opinion so i dont know about other. Overall absolute cinema 🖐🖐
Bro I got skiped first ayase scene on gallery, Isn't there an option that I missed? Please help me
KS!! MORE CHIKA STORY PROGRESSION AND MY SOUL IS YOURS!!!!!
Yes more of her getting railed in love hotels by other men
New Horizons almost reached 500 rating, I congratulate you in advance
love you and your game, KS
Very good graphic and animations! And please add more sex seens and anal)
i actualy like the game and have been waiting for updates for sometime. and have been wondering if any would come out. i have read some of the comments and know critics can sometimes be cruel. anyhow i realise that people of different countries talk different then others and certain words can be in different places then their use to and can seem confusing. i to found myself getting confused while playing certain games like this one. but that don't mean i didn't injoy them. because i did. in fact i have several games saved on an external hard drive. eternum is my number 1 favorit. please donot let the critics keep you from finishing this game. i would love to see where this goes.
ACTUAL REVIEW INCOMING (Not so serious, but I'll try to give some actual criticism), no spoilers.
In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new.
This game has something unique, it really makes you want to keep reading and watching the stunning visuals. I'd say that for being your first game, this is already one of the top VNs there are.
Some of the good things I can point of your story is the amazing setting. Many of the VNs I have played are usually set in the US, which gets boring really fast. Also, the story pacing is great, we get to discover new key points to the story, and yet it leaves you to wonder what's going to happen next, I'd say that this is one of the most attractive things about this VN, it really kept me invested in the story from the first moment. The characters are also really well done, each one has a unique background story which makes them more believable. And I will take this opportunity to comment about the most controversial character, which happens to be a prostitute, and I'm just going to say that whoever thinks that this could potentially ruin their experience is missing on a very good story, sometimes you gotta give your characters a harsh story to make them feel alive, if every girl is just suddenly attracted to the MC it becomes boring, so I'd say this is very brave from KS.
On the negative things about this VN, I want to point that having too many characters show up on one update can be a double edged sword, in my personal opinion, it would be better to make each update centered on 2-3 characters, instead of giving every character little time on screen. And something I wanted to point out is the lack of a visual effect for the flashbacks, I think it would be nice to add some color effect to the flashbacks to make them feel more 'nostalgic' or something, idk, I'm not a game developer lol.
Anyways, that's my honest review of this game, I think that you're cooking with this story, and I'm looking forward to the next updates. 🤵🍷
Oh, and also, Miharu best girl no doubt.
Did you just start off your review with a Ratatouille reference?
I played the first few minutes and have to say that that the English text is very mediocre, translation wise. Some might not care, but for me it's a big immersion breaker.
Also, the screen for the MC name input at the start of the game is completely invisible. I'm on Windows, I had to backspace and type in the name blind. (Note: Now when I run the game a second time, it works perfectly fine. This glitch only comes up when I start the game with zero persistent data. Weird.)
Visually the game looks pretty good! If you bump the English text quality up a notch I'll gladly give it a second shot. It might never happen, I know, but I thought you'd appreciate the feedback.
Now that I’ve played I read the Chika announcement. Honestly it’s pretty refreshing to play a game like this that even touches the topic of prostitution. Even more so that it’s not done in a negative way. Work is work and it puts food on the table. It’s also nice that we’re as far in as we are with few sex scenes. Makes it feel like the characters are people and that there’s a story to tell. Looking forward to more
hey KS? any update on 0.4? what's the progress of 0.4? we're dying to know what happens next..
The amount of white knight save hoes in the comments. lol