Dev b@stard love u man. what a great game u make. Man your dialogue are too deep. It made me again & again Question life & memories. Also mad me think about life other that. Also love your memes at correct time. Also love the fact that childhood sweet heart give her first time to MC & didn't have sexual relationship with other ugly dude(I don't know how he look handsome) most frustrating think is when seeing MC & miharu past. How can she just Simp for other dude when she clearly have feeling for MC even tho she deny it but still her heart & mind was still thinking of MC. It shocking seeing her simping for other dude. Also MC ex was average looking & figure wise tbh. Even some side girls were way better looking & had better figure.
Request:
Please add Queen in harem.
Complain:
Why black hair girl some much attention in game(content) & by everyone in game, when she is not that or beautiful like some other main girls?
Also production thing at each end is too bad & took extra content. Also after each end update the production thing like making movie take the originality & seriousness of game.
Curious:
What future tag can we expect? Will there be group S€X with Harem also threesome? MC mentioned futa with durning start of h-scene with black hair girl. Do we expect futa girl?(tbh I wanna see 1 or 2 futa girl's, one bang by MC as main girl & other bang other side chick's)
My thoughts I was getting a bit frustrated lol with Miharu and the mc Tatsyu. I kept wanting them to actually start dating but it's just me and I dont really like slow burn romance personal preference especially when they previously were intimate. As for Ayase, I cant wait for her to realize Tatsyu romantically. I am intrigued by some of the other ladies as well
Hy dev, your android link is broken. Plz fix or add other link.
2 times my download broken between 600~700MBs also on other website ur download where here is 0.2.1 there is 0.2 & its only around 500~600MBs. So should I download it from there? Also on itch download shows between 1700~1900MBS on my different borrower's.
So with the new update coming out I replayed the whole thing and I'm going to do a mini review like I like to do for games that I'm more interested in.
I'll start with the negatives so that the next paragraph on the positive can wash the sour taste out of your mouth. One thing you've probably already heard is : too many memes. It's funny I know and some of those references made me chuckle, but the risk with including memes in your game is that, by the time people see it, it might be completely dead and turn into a cringe fest(like when Ayase is lying on MC's bed talking about "it's not about the ara ara or the onii-chan", this one was eeeh,I'd like to forget about it). Now onto the "He is special"/"Chosen one" thing this is more a warning than really a criticism because it hasn't turned bad but be careful, there are already some things that, in my opinion seem a little too much yk ? Like the foreigner mumbling about MC being special as he watches him walking away with Ayase. Also I want to say MC getting hit out of nowhere and somehow implented with a seemingly unique chip that probably will have a huge role in the future is a bit big, but this one is probably nitpicking as there probably will be an explanation as to why it was him that got this. But I wanted to talk about it anyways because yk, what a "coincidence".
Now onto the positives. I really like your character models, I thought they were a little too shiney at first but they really grew on me and I think they're gorgeous, everyone looks more or less normal while also looking pretty and that's a huge plus. The hair also looks good which is oftentimes where models really looks uncanny, this one is more about the "vibe" and I couldn't explain. Now onto the writing, I think you did an amazing job with 0.2, getting more information about the world and the characters always makes for a more lifelike story and is extremely important, I hope you will be able to keep it up. Also keep in mind to *show* things and not only tell, I know it's a visual novel but it's crucial that the players can observe the way this story that you're building works without only being fed the information. I didn't put this in the negatives because you haven't failed at this, I'm just including it here as a side note because I like it so far and I am hoping for it to stay as good or better. And finally, going back to the memes, some of them were good choices, I can't lie I did chuckle a few times just from those but I still think you need to be careful which is why I am adding in the positives that you put a settings to turn off the meme cut-ins. It may seem like nothing and some might even say "If you don't like it don't play the game" but I think it's a nice addition for those who want to enjoy the story in a different way.
Aaaand that's about it, I like this game a lot, I see potential in it and I'm excited to see the next update, however long it might take.
Please do not take anything I have said the wrong way, I am not trying to force you into writing the game a certain way, I'm just some guy who's really into reading and sharing his observations
No animation outside of H-scenes, it is a visual novel after all, the fight scenes rely on you for the pace, kind of like reading a manga But I think they're pretty good so far
This update was definitely worth the wait. I played it through from the beginning twice to try different decisions. Well written, great art and awesome action. I just wish that Miharu would get on with telling the MC her true feelings. BTW I think she is hotter than Ayase, but just barely
Everything is on highest quality now like seriously the new content remodeling characters rich story plot twist that is even relatable somehow mix with good choices of music perfect fit for each scene Good writings the HD background reference to some like chainsaw man the humors/memes sex scene is very smooth compared to before as well because of this it's one of my top 10 best VN Worth to wait recommended to play you wouldn't regret it.
Also i just wanna say big respect to you KS-chan for your hardwork and being a solo developer for making an amazing worthwhile VN very admirable and impressive enough to show some support :) can't wait for the next update but take your time no need to rush the longer it takes the better after all.
Hey bro, I can't download it. Every time it reaches 100%, the download fails, and it's happened several times, specifically when downloading this game.Got any ideas on how to fix this mess?I want to play so badd😭
How many hours of content does it have for now? Or does it have atleast a complete Chapter or Episode. I really wanna try it but I hate incomplete endings.
I saw your Twitter page and see that NiiChan also following you, now im more sure that my bully and my lover is one of the avn game that inspired you :)
Just finished this lovely game of yours without skipping.
Here are my thoughts, suggestions, and some constructive criticisms.
1. Character and World building
I really, really enjoy the delicate and nuanced character development and the world-building process. The progression of relationships between each of them in the Japanese underworld setting is slow but natural. Your writing skills are competitive with those in Eternum and/or My Bully Is My Lover: both are popular AVNs. In addition, I found it interesting that you told us not to take everything in this game seriously at the gecko, but the stories and conversations regarding friends and families are so relatable. So far, Ayase and Mikaru are my favorite characters, and the male protangonist is awesome too. However, I am certain that as future updates become available, other girls will have their shining moments!
I also enjoyed your humor and "bloopers" during the credit scenes.It is the very first time I've seen such unique comedic narration in AVNs.
Lastly, there are some hidden hints you planted that may envision the overall direction of the story, and I like that!
2. Models and CGs
Using HS2 model and creative CGs with moans are excellent choices, although the story-writing is so neat to which I forgot there are even H-scenes in this game haha. A minor suggestion would be ... try to fix some minor glitching issues. For instance, in the chronological penultimate H-scene (I don't want to say the name to avoid spoilers), the girl's hair seems to "pierce through" part of her body. I think that's likely a model issue, but it's jut a minor defect and I'm not expert.
3. Music choice I like the selection of American dream pop, rap, other forms of alternative rock, and Japanese city pop as the major background music genres for this game.
(Maybe I'm nitpicking for the following criticism... I apologize in advance)
However, one criticism I would give aims at the repetition of the same OSTs throughout the game. Take a look at Eternum, and My Bully Is My Lover, the number of soundtracks for either game exceeds 200; each song corresponds to a unique section of the stories in each game. Most players I know enjoy the diversity of OSTs employed in both games, and listening to them is basically a revisit to the fantastic stories. If you are familiar with both games, you will know what I mean exactly.
(I hate to be the guy who compares your game to another but... I don't know if there's a better way to do it)
In comparison, your game employs same soundtracks in certain situations, which make those part of the story a bit less unique. For instance, you used the first 30 seconds of "Extreme by My Merry Machine" in many mystical/stressful situations, or "Comedy Cinematic Inspiring" by Romansenykmusic in situations where something interesting and gleeful happens. In Eternum, during comedic scenes, a variety of music were used, such as E-swings (Jules Gaia/Gavin Luke's music, including Glitz At the Ritz, Extravaganza, etc...), Indies (Staionary Sign's No Need to Confuse Me), Mexican/Latin (Cacion del Mariachi by Antonio Banderas ft. Los Lobos), Funk (Astral Dance by Jimit), and others. Each music describes each comedic scenes in their own unique ways.
Conclusively, your taste of music (those you used in the game as OSTs) is awesome, but the collection of OSTs could be a little bit more diverse to make each subsection of your story more unique and memorable. But suggestions are suggestions. After all, this is your dear game and you should be the one who decides if my suggetions are worth the shot. Maybe other types of non-Japanese genre music might not fit the story...!
4. 中文是官方语言之一是我没想到的。Totally not anticipating that. Many of my Chinese friends love your game!
On final note, I'm looking forward to your future updates of this game! It has so much potential and I believe you will make it outstanding!
I am also setting a Spotify playlist for this game which should be available soon.
In addition, as a former Genshin Impact player, I feel that some bgms in the game are familiar. After identifying them, I found that they are indeed the songs in Genshin Impact. I can see that you really like these songs, and I also like them!
I really like the art style of this game, and the female characters inside are all very beautiful and moving. I think the art style of this game can even rival Pale Carnations and Eternal Worlds (these are the other two games I really like). You did a great job!
Additionally, I am curious whether the characters who have had sexual relationships with the male lead will eventually enter the male lead's harem. If not, I would feel sad because these female characters are so charming.
So, we will have a harem ending and option to choose 1 girl if we want, that's very nice having multiple ending and giving the player choices like that always make the game better.
This game has so much potential to become a very, very good VN. I played 1.5.0 and was already hooked. Came back today and saw there was an update and omg kawaiiSukebe you delivered. I didn't really care abt the missing saves cause i had a fun time playing the game. The animations and the overall graphics were very nice but now they are top tier. This VN is already in my top 5 VNs that I've played. Keep up the great work kawaiiSukebe!
Then just delete the old one(0.1.5) and keep only 0.2. no need to "update the game", whatever you meant by that. Or you might wanna trying deleting the save data in user/AppData/roaming/renpy folders and see if that helps. Remember, the old saves from 0.1.5 are not compatible.
yeah, gotta say. this is really good so far. quality work man. keep it up, loving every second of it.
this is immediately going into the check for updates constantly list. seriously, I can tell you put a lot of effort into this and it pays off greatly. up there with ripples/house in the rift and caribdis VN's. fantastic work.
a shame its so hard to find. i'm not sure how itch's system works but it might be worth to update the game with tiny "updates" just to get it onto the top of the new and popular page to get some more eyes on it. might seem a bit disingenuous but i really think if more people could see it you would get a ton more support.
or don't. i dunno how this works, just hoping for the best for you and this project.
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I really love this game so far and i hope it continues on the path its going down
Dev b@stard love u man. what a great game u make. Man your dialogue are too deep. It made me again & again Question life & memories. Also mad me think about life other that. Also love your memes at correct time. Also love the fact that childhood sweet heart give her first time to MC & didn't have sexual relationship with other ugly dude(I don't know how he look handsome) most frustrating think is when seeing MC & miharu past. How can she just Simp for other dude when she clearly have feeling for MC even tho she deny it but still her heart & mind was still thinking of MC. It shocking seeing her simping for other dude. Also MC ex was average looking & figure wise tbh. Even some side girls were way better looking & had better figure.
Request:
Please add Queen in harem.
Complain:
Why black hair girl some much attention in game(content) & by everyone in game, when she is not that or beautiful like some other main girls?
Also production thing at each end is too bad & took extra content. Also after each end update the production thing like making movie take the originality & seriousness of game.
Curious:
What future tag can we expect? Will there be group S€X with Harem also threesome? MC mentioned futa with durning start of h-scene with black hair girl. Do we expect futa girl?(tbh I wanna see 1 or 2 futa girl's, one bang by MC as main girl & other bang other side chick's)
My thoughts I was getting a bit frustrated lol with Miharu and the mc Tatsyu. I kept wanting them to actually start dating but it's just me and I dont really like slow burn romance personal preference especially when they previously were intimate. As for Ayase, I cant wait for her to realize Tatsyu romantically. I am intrigued by some of the other ladies as well
Hy dev, your android link is broken. Plz fix or add other link.
2 times my download broken between 600~700MBs also on other website ur download where here is 0.2.1 there is 0.2 & its only around 500~600MBs. So should I download it from there? Also on itch download shows between 1700~1900MBS on my different borrower's.
So with the new update coming out I replayed the whole thing and I'm going to do a mini review like I like to do for games that I'm more interested in.
I'll start with the negatives so that the next paragraph on the positive can wash the sour taste out of your mouth.
One thing you've probably already heard is : too many memes. It's funny I know and some of those references made me chuckle, but the risk with including memes in your game is that, by the time people see it, it might be completely dead and turn into a cringe fest(like when Ayase is lying on MC's bed talking about "it's not about the ara ara or the onii-chan", this one was eeeh,I'd like to forget about it). Now onto the "He is special"/"Chosen one" thing this is more a warning than really a criticism because it hasn't turned bad but be careful, there are already some things that, in my opinion seem a little too much yk ? Like the foreigner mumbling about MC being special as he watches him walking away with Ayase. Also I want to say MC getting hit out of nowhere and somehow implented with a seemingly unique chip that probably will have a huge role in the future is a bit big, but this one is probably nitpicking as there probably will be an explanation as to why it was him that got this. But I wanted to talk about it anyways because yk, what a "coincidence".
Now onto the positives. I really like your character models, I thought they were a little too shiney at first but they really grew on me and I think they're gorgeous, everyone looks more or less normal while also looking pretty and that's a huge plus. The hair also looks good which is oftentimes where models really looks uncanny, this one is more about the "vibe" and I couldn't explain. Now onto the writing, I think you did an amazing job with 0.2, getting more information about the world and the characters always makes for a more lifelike story and is extremely important, I hope you will be able to keep it up. Also keep in mind to *show* things and not only tell, I know it's a visual novel but it's crucial that the players can observe the way this story that you're building works without only being fed the information. I didn't put this in the negatives because you haven't failed at this, I'm just including it here as a side note because I like it so far and I am hoping for it to stay as good or better. And finally, going back to the memes, some of them were good choices, I can't lie I did chuckle a few times just from those but I still think you need to be careful which is why I am adding in the positives that you put a settings to turn off the meme cut-ins. It may seem like nothing and some might even say "If you don't like it don't play the game" but I think it's a nice addition for those who want to enjoy the story in a different way.
Aaaand that's about it, I like this game a lot, I see potential in it and I'm excited to see the next update, however long it might take.
Please do not take anything I have said the wrong way, I am not trying to force you into writing the game a certain way, I'm just some guy who's really into reading and sharing his observations
Bro Thanks for review. I wanna know that does this game has animationn?
Like animations for character introduction, for fight's & for H-scene? Let me know
No animation outside of H-scenes, it is a visual novel after all, the fight scenes rely on you for the pace, kind of like reading a manga
But I think they're pretty good so far
Oh Thank u for explanation.
Kon
The dev surely is a man/woman/ attack helicopter of culture.The game is gorgeous.
This update was definitely worth the wait. I played it through from the beginning twice to try different decisions. Well written, great art and awesome action. I just wish that Miharu would get on with telling the MC her true feelings. BTW I think she is hotter than Ayase, but just barely
Eurobeat kicked in yoo! Game of the year right there
What can I say the update was worth the wait I loved how the story is going kudos to you my guy
在我心里无法撼动的神作
Very good game hope you continue this i really like this game its a masterpiece
Everything is on highest quality now like seriously the new content remodeling characters rich story plot twist that is even relatable somehow mix with good choices of music perfect fit for each scene Good writings the HD background reference to some like chainsaw man the humors/memes sex scene is very smooth compared to before as well because of this it's one of my top 10 best VN Worth to wait recommended to play you wouldn't regret it.
Also i just wanna say big respect to you KS-chan for your hardwork and being a solo developer for making an amazing worthwhile VN very admirable and impressive enough to show some support :) can't wait for the next update but take your time no need to rush the longer it takes the better after all.
Hey bro, I can't download it. Every time it reaches 100%, the download fails, and it's happened several times, specifically when downloading this game.Got any ideas on how to fix this mess?I want to play so badd😭
I have alternative links in my Patreon page. You can go there and see which one works for you
Finally, it worked. Thank you!
How many hours of content does it have for now? Or does it have atleast a complete Chapter or Episode. I really wanna try it but I hate incomplete endings.
I'm curious too.
5 to 7 hrs depending on your read speed.
I saw your Twitter page and see that NiiChan also following you, now im more sure that my bully and my lover is one of the avn game that inspired you :)
YO!
Lessgooo cameo :D
Hi KS:
Just finished this lovely game of yours without skipping.
Here are my thoughts, suggestions, and some constructive criticisms.
1. Character and World building
I really, really enjoy the delicate and nuanced character development and the world-building process. The progression of relationships between each of them in the Japanese underworld setting is slow but natural. Your writing skills are competitive with those in Eternum and/or My Bully Is My Lover: both are popular AVNs. In addition, I found it interesting that you told us not to take everything in this game seriously at the gecko, but the stories and conversations regarding friends and families are so relatable. So far, Ayase and Mikaru are my favorite characters, and the male protangonist is awesome too. However, I am certain that as future updates become available, other girls will have their shining moments!
I also enjoyed your humor and "bloopers" during the credit scenes.It is the very first time I've seen such unique comedic narration in AVNs.
Lastly, there are some hidden hints you planted that may envision the overall direction of the story, and I like that!
2. Models and CGs
Using HS2 model and creative CGs with moans are excellent choices, although the story-writing is so neat to which I forgot there are even H-scenes in this game haha. A minor suggestion would be ... try to fix some minor glitching issues. For instance, in the chronological penultimate H-scene (I don't want to say the name to avoid spoilers), the girl's hair seems to "pierce through" part of her body. I think that's likely a model issue, but it's jut a minor defect and I'm not expert.
3. Music choice
I like the selection of American dream pop, rap, other forms of alternative rock, and Japanese city pop as the major background music genres for this game.
(Maybe I'm nitpicking for the following criticism... I apologize in advance)
However, one criticism I would give aims at the repetition of the same OSTs throughout the game. Take a look at Eternum, and My Bully Is My Lover, the number of soundtracks for either game exceeds 200; each song corresponds to a unique section of the stories in each game. Most players I know enjoy the diversity of OSTs employed in both games, and listening to them is basically a revisit to the fantastic stories. If you are familiar with both games, you will know what I mean exactly.
(I hate to be the guy who compares your game to another but... I don't know if there's a better way to do it)
In comparison, your game employs same soundtracks in certain situations, which make those part of the story a bit less unique. For instance, you used the first 30 seconds of "Extreme by My Merry Machine" in many mystical/stressful situations, or "Comedy Cinematic Inspiring" by Romansenykmusic in situations where something interesting and gleeful happens. In Eternum, during comedic scenes, a variety of music were used, such as E-swings (Jules Gaia/Gavin Luke's music, including Glitz At the Ritz, Extravaganza, etc...), Indies (Staionary Sign's No Need to Confuse Me), Mexican/Latin (Cacion del Mariachi by Antonio Banderas ft. Los Lobos), Funk (Astral Dance by Jimit), and others. Each music describes each comedic scenes in their own unique ways.
Conclusively, your taste of music (those you used in the game as OSTs) is awesome, but the collection of OSTs could be a little bit more diverse to make each subsection of your story more unique and memorable. But suggestions are suggestions. After all, this is your dear game and you should be the one who decides if my suggetions are worth the shot. Maybe other types of non-Japanese genre music might not fit the story...!
4. 中文是官方语言之一是我没想到的。Totally not anticipating that. Many of my Chinese friends love your game!
On final note, I'm looking forward to your future updates of this game! It has so much potential and I believe you will make it outstanding!
I am also setting a Spotify playlist for this game which should be available soon.
Yours sincerely
Pigrider Starwatcher
first time playing and i see dora the buff explorer int he background. Good game
In addition, as a former Genshin Impact player, I feel that some bgms in the game are familiar. After identifying them, I found that they are indeed the songs in Genshin Impact. I can see that you really like these songs, and I also like them!
I really like the art style of this game, and the female characters inside are all very beautiful and moving. I think the art style of this game can even rival Pale Carnations and Eternal Worlds (these are the other two games I really like). You did a great job!
Additionally, I am curious whether the characters who have had sexual relationships with the male lead will eventually enter the male lead's harem. If not, I would feel sad because these female characters are so charming.
I finish the game 0.2 i found out that you remake the game like changes their faces but great story and love it!
Wating for another update hehe
How to unlock the last scene(The one with the image of Yaezaki Ayase)😭, I've already replayed the game like 4 times and I still don't know.
Please help.
I cannot spoil here. However, if you want, you can join my Discord server, where you will find the answers there.
I am curious will this game have harem ending or you have to choose one girl
Harem will be a thing ofc. However, I might make individual endings for more prominent girls as well. If I have time eventually.
So, we will have a harem ending and option to choose 1 girl if we want, that's very nice having multiple ending and giving the player choices like that always make the game better.
Thanks very much for replying!
Can there be a harem ending without Ayase?
I started screaming when i heard the raiden shogun theme (cuz im a raiden main myself) Omfg KS you are a LEGEND
Character modeling is really amazing, girls are all very good-looking, supporting the author and supporting the game!
Thanks playing the game, I'm glad you liked it~
This game has so much potential to become a very, very good VN. I played 1.5.0 and was already hooked. Came back today and saw there was an update and omg kawaiiSukebe you delivered. I didn't really care abt the missing saves cause i had a fun time playing the game. The animations and the overall graphics were very nice but now they are top tier. This VN is already in my top 5 VNs that I've played. Keep up the great work kawaiiSukebe!
Thanks for plying the game! I'm glad you enjoyed it~
Man this game is pretty good. Keep up the good work, and I'm glad this is harem hahaha it's hard to pick only one girl
i didnt get it it saying 0.2.0 and then want i go to play it. it stops at the end of 1.5.0
Did you download the game yesterday? or today?
i download it when it was in 1.5.0 and when i update the game it saying 0.2.0
Are you playing on android?
no pc
Then just delete the old one(0.1.5) and keep only 0.2. no need to "update the game", whatever you meant by that. Or you might wanna trying deleting the save data in user/AppData/roaming/renpy folders and see if that helps. Remember, the old saves from 0.1.5 are not compatible.
Love this game. But seriously, why don't you have a Subscribestar link. They are way more tolerant and if that isn't good enough, the why not Steam
Glad u came back to update!It's still as high quality as ever, and I noticed many citypop in!Miharu's text is veryyy good, but I still prefer Ayase!hh
The theme,song, characters,maps and characters is very good and beautiful at the same time
I would like to ask, there is no plans to add any ntr in the future right? I hope not. Btw this is really a good game so keep up the good work
There will not be NTR content in the game~
Is there ever going to be a replay gallery or something implemented, just asking.
Replay Gallery is already in the 0.2 update now~
One of the best avn
Thanks or playing~
Hello! Where to download the horizon 0.2?
For now this is the planned dates for release, but anything might be subject to change.
Maverick: Beta access
Eclipse: Beta access
Tsuki: April 30th, 10 AM (UTC +8)
Gang Boss: May 5th, 10 AM (UTC+8)
Thug: May 10th, 10 AM (UTC+8)
Classmate: May 13th, 10 AM (UTC+8)
Public release: May 15th, 10 AM (UTC+8)
Thanks!
Bro.im.playing this game in family gathering and yeah i dont have earphone... I got shock when it says yamete... Fk everyone is looking at me 😭😭😭😭
Ara Ara~ Welcome to New Horizon~
i just wanted to comment on the Nier Automata reference shot
yeah, gotta say. this is really good so far. quality work man. keep it up, loving every second of it.
this is immediately going into the check for updates constantly list. seriously, I can tell you put a lot of effort into this and it pays off greatly. up there with ripples/house in the rift and caribdis VN's. fantastic work.
a shame its so hard to find. i'm not sure how itch's system works but it might be worth to update the game with tiny "updates" just to get it onto the top of the new and popular page to get some more eyes on it. might seem a bit disingenuous but i really think if more people could see it you would get a ton more support.
or don't. i dunno how this works, just hoping for the best for you and this project.
new update coming soon :)
just entered testing